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"YO! (y/n) I haven't seen you in awhile," You're lovable American friend yelled out running over to you.

"Um, Alfie, we saw each other yesterday." You sighed out, tucking your (h/l) (h/c) hair behind your ear.

((short story of your history with Alfred))

You and him had met in Grade 1, when you were being bullied by a boy with long blonde wavy hair, named Francis. You remembered the day well, you had just switched schools in the middle of October, so everyone was already labeled. Before you came to this school, you had no clue about labels and stuff like that. In your Kindergarden everybody was friends and stuff, so you weren't used to bullies. Francis had such a creepy, yucky face it made you squirm. He knelt done creepily, and held out his hand preparing to grab something near your chest. It was your most beloved teddy bear, (bear/name). He snatched it and laughed his weird, "ohonhonhonhon," laugh and went to run away, creepily again. He reminded you of those... Perverts your mommy told you about. The ones who did mean things to little kids. As he was running away, a boy with a snug fitted superman shirt and tights ran in. Well... he also had one of those funny looking six pack things on his shirt, and it wasn't Halloween. He made you giggle a bit.
"Stop, you friend... no that's not it... it's got an F in it..." His voice started out loud but no it was a whisper, as he thought. He had caught Mr. Frenchy's attention though, he was sneering at the weird boy. Now that you were watching... He also had a weird piece of hair sticking out on his medium length, blonde hair. That was funny too.
"FIEND! YEAH, STOP, YOU FIEND! THE HERO IS HERE!" Then he sprinted forward reaching for the beloved bear... Frenchy was prepared and held Mr. Hero back with one hand, while holding the bear back with his other.
"Hey, dude, uncool, you cant be mean to such a pretty girl!" Mr. Hero muttered, little did he realize you had snuck up from behind Francis, and took the bear back.
"That was my plan all along!" Mr. Hero announced before walking over to you.
"Um, thanks for the help..." You whispered out shyly,
"No problem, you can call me Alfred the Hero by the way" He shouted loudly, laughing a bit,
"um, I'm (y/n)!" You shouted as loud as him, overcoming your shyness, due to his trusting blue eyes. SInce then you had given Alfred the bear in grade 6.

((Back to the future))

After talking to him for a bit, you noticed he wouldn't take his hand out from behind his back.

"Alfred the Hero," You laughed out, " I'm wondering why you won't remove that hand from behind your back?" You asked before trying to run behind him and failing. After Alfred laughed at you for awhile, he took his hand out from his back. Right there, was the bear you had given him all those years ago, in perfect condition, holding a letter.

"I thought you should have this back!" He said, blushing a bit, "it made a great sidekick..." Then he muttered something you couldn't make out, gave you the bear and he ran away. You were staring in awe at the bear, you thought he'd get rid of it. If it was a collectable you'd say it was in mint condition. Snapping back to reality, you removed the letter from it's paws, opening the square envelope a letter was revealed. It read out,

"Dear (y/n),

You're like the Mary Jane to my Spiderman,
The Lois Lane to my Superman,
The Pepper Potts to my Iron man,
so, let me be your one and only hero?

Love Alfred"

Oh mah gerd, he loves me I love him. You ran to his house and he answered the door... In his underwear.

"oh hi, (y/n)... Did you read my letter?"

"Here's my answer!" You replied, going on your tippy toes and kissing him on his lips, after removing yourself, you whispered in his ear,
"You've always been my hero, and you were always the only one." He then dragged you inside... To make you watch The Uninvited with him.
I was bored again, tell me if i need to correct stuffs and yeah, comment if you like it... And Fun fact, I overcooked my noodles making this :icongivingupplz:
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:iconobsessed-otaku:
Obsessed-Otaku Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015
"o my gerd" -everyone in 6th grade
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Whybot221 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
ooh The Uninvited was a good movie...i loved the twist ending
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Wafflepigs Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Omg
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MMMMM2MMMMM Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That....... Won't happen to me..... :icondepressplz:
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
:icontherethereplz: Shhhh Shhhh :iconbrohugplz: someday.. someday it shall :3
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MMMMM2MMMMM Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah.... I guess it will.... But still.... It's too adorable and too good to be true!! :iconcryplz:
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Ahhhh, sorry for such a late reply :P But don't get your hopes down It migh :iconyayamericaplz:
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MMMMM2MMMMM Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe~!! *Now, gotta start my Hetalia Choice Fanfic... I hope no one has the same idea as mine...*
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
I bet itll be good
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MMMMM2MMMMM Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
N-no it wouldn't!! I mean, it won't be as good as the other stuff I read...
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AnimeGirl105 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O_o Oh my gosh I was watching Iron Man while reading this....... (It must be fait!!!!)
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
LOL YESS :P
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celticcolt12 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
not the noodles!!!!!
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
D: I knowww but I haven't cooked them wrong since :D
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Pichoochoo Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh! This reminds me of that one time, I was coming back from McDonald's to visit my friend. When he opened the door; he was in his underwear which made me spit my drink out to the side. He'll never shut up about it since this day. ;___;
Cute story!
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hetaliais Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
once I had brought my bracelet to school, it was one with charms, some had pitures in them and some were empty, the reason I took it to school was because my brother gave it to me three days before he died, at one point the most popular girl in school said and I quote "what a stupid bracelet, your brother must have hated you if he gave you that!" and then she took it off me, took out all of the pictures of me and my brother together and ripped them up, then she walked away with my bracelet, then my best guy friend andy went up to her and took it away from her and gave it back to me, two days later me and andy were sent up to the pricipals office when we got there the principal said "is it true that andy took beas bracelet and grave it to you?" the pricipal said looking at me so I told him what happend and about my brothers pictures and all that, since I was a well behaved student I was believed and bea got detention for a month for lying, stealing and the destruction of someone elses property
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Haruko-tan Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
*falls over from the feels of the letter* Writer-sama~ how cute!! *gets back up*....!!!*falls back over from the lack of pants* M-Merica-chan...WTF?...Put some pants on, brosky. :iconpervplz:
Awesome story!!
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
*Squeals* Ohhh thank youuu :3 I'm glad you like it
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Haruko-tan Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional General Artist
I do~ ^^
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MonkeyDSophie Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
OH MAH GERD..

Can I just say I love you?
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
xD thank you :D I'm taking it that you like it
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nettybester Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
myy bearss namme iis sabastien.. andd hhe iss quitee boss iif i ddo ssayy sso mmyself :)
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
xD mine's name is Syrup xD skilled naming skills right there :P
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nettybester Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Quitee skilled indeedd :)
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Anelie2beilshmidt Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just made my day
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
xD Thanks :P I'm glad it did :P
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Anelie2beilshmidt Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome
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supermegaLinkfan Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
No one steals Ringo and gets away with it!
Good story by the way!:3
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012
xD thank you :P
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lea777666 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
O.O back then I had meh care bear. Alfred put on some pants .^.
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
xD I still have my childhood care bear :P :iconsexyamericaplz: :iconsaysplz: NEVERRRR heroes dont always wear pants :3
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lea777666 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
Which one did u have? I have Cheer Bear..( holy how do k still remember that ).
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
:iconohmygoshplz: I had the same one xD
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lea777666 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
O_O >:3 rise of the cheer bears
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
x3 totally
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MaiSodenoShirayuki Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Alfred....Put some pants on...
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
... :iconsexyamericaplz: :iconsaysplz: Neverrrrr
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MaiSodenoShirayuki Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: :iconfacepalmplz:
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
:iconheroamericaplz: :iconsaysplz: whaaaattttt
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MaiSodenoShirayuki Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: ...Just put some pants on and then we'll talk...
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
:iconsadamericaplz: :iconsaysplz: fine *puts pants on*
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MaiSodenoShirayuki Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: *pulls America down to her height and kisses him*
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
:iconamericablushplz: :iconsaysplz: THE HERO LWAYS GETS THE GIRL! :iconherotimeplz:
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Maplegirl16 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
The superhero references in this made me Fangirl even more.

(Avengers and Justice Leauge FANGIRL!!! TOTAL EFFING FANGIRL!!)
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
xD ikr xD I love all the super heroes :P
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Maplegirl16 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
Captin America is my favorite :3 and he was before I knew hetalia too.
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:iconbrooklyn333:
brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
xD me too
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Maplegirl16 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
Yay!
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ilovepercy122 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH GOD. THE UNINVITED. I SAW THAT MOVIE BY ACCADENT WHEN I WAS 8. SCARRED ME FOR LIFE.
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brooklyn333 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
xD I watched it last week with my friends >.<
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